There's an extraneous comma gone from the tagline. Yes, if we're going to start using the English language properly, it shouldn't have been there. I've always written how I talk though (mostly bollocks as you've noticed), so it was for emphasis.
Would you believe, of all the people to point such a thing out, it was a Shoreditch-dwelling, left-handed, professional designer/deep house musician? Not any of the deeply detailed-obsessed developers that hang around these parts, oh no. It was the 'cool' one.
Joyce, have you been hanging around with Conway recently?